Ice moon prisms shield,
Broad cloud bowl scoops city sky-
Heart-held secures change.
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Icy moon the gloaming prisms shield,
Broad bowl of cloud and color
Scoops the widening city sky...
Holding my heart,
Securing the change that comes.
*note on Form: while I dearly love the little Haiku, and am an extreme devotee of Sonnets... I do often find a lack of freedom in the meeting of their requirements so I personally prefer version two above... cjk
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